Feedback Unit 3

Early Adolescent's Interplay between mind and body feedback-

Brittany and Hope-

I would like to begin by expressing that I think the page is well organized, with clear headings and follows an easy- to- read format.  However, I think that the title of the page should include “Early Adolescent Females” to make it clear as to what population the entire web page will be addressing. The bullet points offered under risk factors I think should have been carried through to the preventative factors for aesthetics and flow. I did not notice any predominant grammatical or spelling errors throughout the page, and the writing style was clear and logical. I liked the information offered regarding the high demand for nutrition and fitness during this stage of development due to all the body changes occurring. I think it would have been interesting if you offered a comparison of dietary and fitness demands for males, and how the differences may impact societal views on the male and female bodies. The athlete triad is also a great piece of information since many parents may overlook their child’s eating habits due to thoughts that they are “healthy” and active athletes. More information could have been added to expand the parents or healthcare providers understanding of the interplay between the mind and body, and how mental health can directly impact physical health. Additional information on how to encourage/promote mental and physical health at this stage would have also been helpful. Overall, great work!