Introduction

Hope and Brittany, your writeup on the Psychosocial aspects of mind and body in Early Adolescence was very interesting. I thought you did a great job of using videos to introduce the topic and to support  your points throughout the webpage. I also thought your use of images and charts was appropriate and helped your presentation both aesthetically and by providing more information. The essential elements of “psychological factors, emotional factors, social factors, and implications on health and well-being” were clearly labeled and most of your content fit the headlines in a clear and logical way. However, there were times when the writing was not easy to follow, requiring a couple of read throughs to get the message. There were some typos and grammatical errors in these cases. I thought you did a good job of presenting, summarizing and discussing the topics via the text, images, and videos. 

One last note, I would recommend going through and look at the usage/placement of “adolescence, adolescents, and adolescent’s” to be sure you are using the correct grammar. I find myself making these types of errors too, but for some reason, they are easier to catch in someone else’s work than your own. 

Overall, I thought you did a great job with this assignment.

Pete