Unit 3 Feedback

Hi Brittany,

Thank you for your work on your website section. Overall, you included all of the main points that we were instructed to include in this assignment with appropriate headings and sections. I think your overall layout was easy to follow and your wording was easy to understand. Your graphics supplemented your written material well and were appropriate for you population and this unit. Below I have listed a few suggestions and potential grammatical errors:

• ·        Place “of” after all in  the first paragraph in sentence 3
• ·        Maybe you could add more in the diet section besides calories and protein intake that constitute a healthy diet.
• ·        Change adolescent to plural form in fitness paragraph sentence 2.
• ·        Place a comma after (HHS) in the fitness paragraph.
• ·        Change explains to explain.
• ·        Change increases to increase.
• ·        I suggest enlarging your graphics some to allow readers increased ease of reading them.
• ·        Change that to who in the sentence “Female athletes that are suffering.”
• ·        Change negative to negatively in the female athlete triad paragraph.
• ·        Change do to due in the last paragraph.

Great job on your section; I really enjoyed reading your work. I think this will be a valuable tool for healthcare providers in the future.