Unit 4 Feedback

The writers of this page did a nice job of making sure that all four components of the unit were on their page.  The components are also well thought out and provide good detailed information.  The writers of this page did a good job of using headings.  The headings that the writers used indicated what that section of the page would discuss.

The writers organized their page in a very clear manner.  The page flowed well and it wasn’t confusing to follow along.  The way that the writers first described what anxiety was then how it affects a person in early adolescence to treatment options and the downfall of the disease and treatment options were all transitioned nicely.  I did not see any grammatical or spelling issues with this page.  The writers did their diligence in making sure that their page appeared without any writing errors.  The writing style did appear to be clear and it was easy to follow along throughout the paragraphs.  I believe that the writers did a good job of providing a lot of information but in concise paragraphs. 

The writers did a good job displaying information in a format that is easy to follow and flows well.  The writers also choose images that went along with the context of the paragraphs they are with further applying detail to the topic.  The videos that the writers chose are very insightful and are great additions to this page.  I especially liked the last video giving the perspective of the adolescents with anxiety. 

I do believe that this information is useful to healthcare providers, especially to health care providers in the fields of working with early adolescents.  I also believe that the videos that the writers choose are very useful to healthcare providers as they provide the perspective from the adolescent who can help providers better assist them.