Feedback Unit 6

Are the three basic elements for Unit 6 (types of technology for women's health, advantages of using technology for women's health, disadvantages of using technology for women's health) of the website section adequate? If not, what is missing? 

In the group Early Adolescence the webpage for technology and health does incorporate the three basic elements more than adequately. 

Did the writers use headings and subheadings well to clarify the sections of the text? 

The writers did a good job of their use of headers and subheadings to clearly identify the sections of the webpage.  Their use of subheadings and headings makes it easy for the reader to scroll from one section to the next or to easily pick one section they want to read.

Were the basic elements organized in a way that is logical, clear, and easy for the reader to follow? 

The way that the page is laid out is very clear and easy to follow making it logical.  The description of the two apps first and then the advantages and disadvantages of using technology make it easy for the reader to follow along.

Were there any grammatical or spelling problems?

There was really only one part where there was some miswording it seemed like to myself.  The sentence that I am referring to is the last sentence of the 2^nd paragraph and I think a very easy switch that will make the sentence read smoother would be to put the word “which” instead of ‘with” after self-confidence.

Was the writing style clear? Were the paragraphs and sentences cohesive? 

Did the writers adequately summarize and discuss the topic through writing, images, and/or videos? 

The writers of this webpage did a good job of making the webpage easy to read and follow along.  The paragraphs were just long enough to provide detailed information but cohesive enough to not lose a reader in the amount of information given.  I thought that the writers did a very nice job of presenting their apps and how it would be beneficial to females in early adolescence. I also thought the writers did a nice job with their video choices and images to help provide more insight to the page.

Is the information useful for healthcare providers? 

I believe that the information provided would be helpful for healthcare providers that work with females in early adolescence.  I think the writers did a great job of choosing the Nike Training Club app as this is one many different providers could use with a young female to help her.